4. “‘It is well. I go; but remember, I shall be with you on your wedding night.’” (123)
This is the threat that Frankenstien receives from his monster after he breaks his promising of creating a female for the creature. This obviously is showing his jealously of love and happiness, and his wish to prevent Frankenstein, the one who denied him of this, from having love. It also might be implying that he craves a kind of love from Frankenstein and is jealous of anyone who receives it. It once again makes the reader feel pity for the creature because of his loneliness.
careful about "obvious" -- it passes considerable judgment on your reader -- and if it is obvious, why bother discussing it?
ReplyDeleteAlso, a lot of "it" in there
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ReplyDeleteThis is the threat that Frankenstien receives from his monster after he breaks his promising of creating a female for the creature. This is showing his jealously of love and happiness, and his wish to prevent Frankenstein, the one who denied him of this, from having love. This threat also might be implying that he craves a kind of love from Frankenstein and is jealous of anyone who receives it. It once again makes the reader feel pity for the creature because of his loneliness.